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New Discoveries about Maya Civilization: Perfect timing for my next editing project

Way back in 2013 I managed to write an entire 1st draft during NaNoWriMo. I call it The Vern after an important religious figure in the book. The setting is inspired by the Maya, but I made up all the religious ceremonies etc based on another idea I had even longer ago. Anyway, the setting, temples, food, clothing, and architecture is all Maya-inspired.

I’ve recently decided this will be the next project I focus on after I finish writing Skyfall because the first draft is complete. The book I started writing during NaNo 2016 isn’t finished yet, so I decided to hold off on that one. My goal–and a steep one–will be to revise it by the end of the year. This is probably overly ambitious, but I can try.

So, when I heard on the radio that archeologists have discovered that the Maya civilization is much more extensive in area and dense in population than previously thought, I figured it was a sign I’d chosen the correct project to work on next. This is so exciting for me because what I’ve imagined for my book is actually closer to reality than I expected. I had to fudge some stuff (it’s fantasy, remember) to create the feeling I wanted for the setting, but now I’ll be closer to the truth which is always nice. The big discoveries I’m most interested in are:

  • denser population (3-4x what they thought), possibly 10 million people
  • cities connected by raised causeways! for trade and travel
  • massive farming and irrigation operations
  •  more interconnected fortifications and other evidence of war than they thought and from before they thought

All of this will help define the world of The Vern when I go back and start revising. I’m really hoping to focus on my setting this next draft and all this will help. I’m pretty good at societal structures and history in my world-building, but the actual physical details are more difficult for me.

 

History is Complex

So I know this is perhaps the most understated of all understatements of all time, but it’s a problem for me. My Dakotashi series started out as kind of an more nebulous alternate world that echoed our own, like Jacqueline Carey’s Kushiel’s Dart series. But then it morphed into something a little more based in our reality, but still with significant changes, especially for my alternate England (Breinnan) and alternate Japan (Kansa). So the whole world-building aspect has been a major roadblock for me.

Even simple things like—Do I call Shakespeare Shakespeare, or do I give him a different name?—cause rounds of debate with myself. I’ve already given him a slightly different background for his characters in Romeo and Juliet although the plot remains the same (I also renamed it as it no longer takes place in Italy–oh the ripples!). The monarchy, I’m thinking starting with Queen Elizabeth, is completely different. How much of the rest of politics and history stays the same? It’s times like these that I wish I had taken an English history course in college. I would have, but I think that professor was on sabbatical for part of the time, offered courses that weren’t the ones I wanted (which let’s face it would probably have focused on Queen Elizabeth; Young Bess was one of my favorite movies growing up), or were in conflict with other classes. Honestly, I don’t really remember. I just wish I had a better foundation beyond the numerous regency romance novels I’ve read.

Beyond the two main countries I’m focusing on, I think the rest of the world can remain basically the same, but it’s still a little overwhelming. So I’ve been avoiding doing anything about it. Well, that has to stop if I’m going to be able to continue with my revision for Book 2. In this book, Breinnan and Kansa (where the invaders were magically sent from hundreds of years ago) come into contact. In order to make the interactions with the delegation from Kansa have stakes and tension, I obviously need to know the motivations on both sides, which has a lot to do with what is going on elsewhere in the world.

So I read up on the period in my Complete Idiot’s Guide to World History and perused more details in Wikipedia. Stellar sources of information, I know. Still, it’s helping. I think. I haven’t nailed down exactly when my story takes place: during the early part of the French Revolution, the Reign of Terror or during the Napoleonic Wars, but at least I have a better overview of the timeline again. It’s been a long time since the general World History course I took in college.

I also read a little about the East India Trading Company, which could cause even more trouble for me. How would having a king of Asian descent affect trade in that part of the world? Would it matter? Would it be an advantage? I know even less about the history of Britain’s trading empire than I do the French Revolution/Napoleonic Wars.

I’m doing everything backwards! But the fact I’m thinking about all of this is a step in the right direction. Baby steps, people.

Five Things I Learned at World Fantasy Convention 2014

I meant to do this sooner after I got back, but here it is now.

  1. I need to do more research. A lot more.
  2. There is a difference between alternate history and historical fantasy and I am STILL not sure which exactly it is I am writing.
  3. Mary Robinette Kowal is amazing! So glad I got to talk to her a little bit. Also, the new series she is working on is going to be awesome. I can tell you this with absolute authority because I’ve now read 8 chapters of it. (I can’t tell you how.) Just trust me. On a completely unrelated note, I don’t think I would ever be able to post a chapter for reader feedback right after I had written it. I will have to read more of her blog when I get a change to see if she writes more about her process.
  4. Next time, I need to be more forward and introduce myself to more people. Because people are nice.
  5. Next time, I will avoid panels relating specifically to horror and/or “literature.” Due to my policy of not making waves on the internets, I shall say nothing more.

Overall, it was a great experience and I’m glad I went. I’m glad I took some notes because my brain filled up and I’ve already forgotten a lot of what was said. It was not a great place to keep up with my NaNo word count, but the atmosphere and panels were great fodder for ideas and I now have a better idea of my next project.

Writer’s Retreat

Last week,  I took the opportunity of a new fiscal year and a fresh pot of vacation hours to go on a personal writing retreat. I found a place in an isolated little village in Vermont and did nothing but write, revise and research for five days. This was helped by a spotty internet connection and no cell service.I was able to finish the big rewrite of my book that I have been planning for over a year and made some other bigger revisions that I only thought of recently as well. This included a 40k-word section rewritten/revised. Of that, 16k words that were either new scenes or completely rewritten.

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