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Busting a Writing Blockage

So I’m lucky enough to have never experienced what most people think of as writer’s block. That iconic image of staring at a bright screen and literally having no idea what to write. That’s never happened to me. I have occasionally worried I might run out of ideas for stories, but inevitably something will strike me at the oddest time. I’ve had two ideas while listening to NPR so I give my local station a monthly donation because they are awesome!!!

I have gotten stuck before in a WIP (many times!), but I’ve never thought of it as writer’s block, per se because it isn’t that I don’t know what to write, I’m just having some sort of issue with my manuscript that I need to work through before I can continue. My subconscious knows there is a problem with the story.  And now after an epiphany about my current WIP in the wee hours last night, I’ve begun to think of what I typically experience as a writing blockage. The story is temporarily clogged, but with some prodding, the blockage will clear and the story will flow freely again.

Sometimes I don’t even realize I have a blockage until after I’ve figured it out. And then I’m like, oh I should have known there was something wrong with the story, since I’ve been so reluctant to work on it! Hopefully, others will be better at recognizing it than me because I have some ideas on how to be a plumber for your own story (am I taking this metaphor too far? I think I might be!).

This time I attributed my lack of eagerness for my WIP to still being burnt out from NaNoWriMo. I wrote 80k and there’s still so much story left! It was a little overwhelming. But I didn’t really worry about it because I’ve been busy with other writerly and productive things this month. So that’s my first suggestion: take a break. Do something else creative for awhile. Let your brain rest from one story to work on something else. Then, when you go back, you might see the problem more clearly. I realized that I was having my character do something because PLOT REASONS and not because she would actually do that thing. It made sense at the time when I was outlining, but when I was writing, it felt wrong. I pushed that thought away because NaNoWriMo, but my gut was correct. So I went ahead and revised the scene a little bit, toned it down some and now I’m much more comfortable with the direction.

If you don’t have time to take a break or don’t have another project to work on, try rereading what you’ve written. You may not want to start revising (you can if you want to), but think about the choices your characters make or the things happening to them, look for problems with the story that may be causing your blockage. Brainstorm some different choices for them. What would happen if they chose differently at a key point? Or maybe the problem is with what you’re going to write next. Brainstorm different ideas for where the story might go, maybe your brain is telling you you need to rethink the direction. Brainstorming is awesome because none of it is set in stone (and by stone I mean in-story words, which obviously aren’t set in stone, but may be hard to delete since you worked so hard on them). See where it takes you.

And finally, pick up a writing book. Something about plot and structure or character development or anything storytelling/craft related (I don’t think grammar books would have the same impact). Read a couple chapters and let your mind wander down whatever path it wants. Jot down notes. My brain is always sparking when reading books about writing, even if I’ve read the book before. And even if the book doesn’t relate to the issue you are having, you never know what connections your brain will make. Two of my favorites are Donald Maass and James Scott Bell, but there are so many writing books out there. You don’t even necessarily need to take any of their advice either, but if there are exercises, try them out. The main goal is to get your story flowing again.

Hopefully, I will remain blockage free moving forward and I hope you do too! But if the worst happens, maybe one of these ideas will help you out. Happy writing!

 

NaNoWriMo 2017: Skyfall

I’m so excited to get started writing my project for this year’s NaNoWriMo. As I explained this is a complete revamp of my very first novel. At its core, it’s similar: girl wants to do this cool thing she’s dreamed of her whole, but can’t because magic sucks. But the world and magic are completely different.

Believe it or not, I was inspired by the Matt Damon’s movie, The Great Wall. While it’s no The Martian, I actually quite enjoyed it. The pageantry of the army was great and it was the crane divers that really started me off on my new idea–that and a segment on NPR about a woman who works as a scientific researcher, trying to cure her own neurologic genetic disease, which would cause her to deteriorate rapidly once she started showing symptoms.

I also used an idea I had years and year ago–I called it my flying world–where people flew to help them battle in a war because they were constantly being attacked by countries who wanted their magic. Those flyers had wings (and this was completely unrelated to my first novel starring Marla) but in this novel they don’t, they use magic that basically controls their relationship with gravity. But they do live in a country constantly battling to survive because the surrounding nations want their magic.

Skyfalls are what those who wield this magic are called. They use it to make weapons for the military to use. The book is her struggle to come to terms with the new direction to her life (and a whole host of other problems as well.)

I have more scenes planned than will take me to get to 80k words, which is my goal and I’ve only planned through Act II, so it might be a long one.

Should I or shouldn’t I?

Important question alert! NaNoWriMo has new merchandise out for 2017. Luckily for my wallet, I tend not to love the design every year. I didn’t buy anything last year, but bought a couple of things the year before. This year it looks like a love year. The theme is “superpowered noveling.” The designs are modern, clean and fun.

I’m particularly interested in the shirt  and the mug.  Should I go for it?

I’m mulling over what to work on this November and I might be super ambitious again. The last time I was ambitious (2013 for those of you not keeping track), I set a 80k-word goal, but also intended to write one full novel (The Vern), and hopefully start on another (Dakotashi 2). And I did both on my way to 130k words.

This time I would try to finish a novel (Cybermagic) and start on a new novel (Marla-revamp). Could go for 80k again, or maybe push it a little to 90k or even 100k (eek!). Should I purchase some goodies in honor of my goal?

What do you think?

Writing, Distractions, Brainstorming and more!

Alas! It has been a long time since I updated this space. I primarily blame searching for and landing a new job and the process of selling my condo, buying a townhouse and moving.

Other things that have happened since I last posted…

  1. I did successfully complete NaNo16 in word count. The book still needs an ending.
  2. I successfully completed a Whole30. It literally took over my life—soooo much cooking!—but even now, months after I finished, I’m trying to generally (sometimes very generally) to keep to the template.
  3.  Went on vacation to Grand Tetons and Yellowstone, which inspired me to set one of my books in that general region.
  4. Successfully completed a 40 hour goal in July for Camp NaNoWriMo, working on #5 and #6 below.
  5. Thought of a way to revamp my very first novel into something much less derivative (gravity magic a death sentence! Small country surrounded and constantly at war! Society/government contains no kings or princes, but a delicate system of checks and balances between military, forge magic (w/health benefits), and legislature. Physical setting see #3!). Same characters–Marla, Russ & Nat–with similar backgrounds and goals. I’m currently brainstorming.
  6. Finished my (hopefully!) last big revision for Dakotashi. I changed the beginning around. Now, I’m polishing/editing and getting it ready to query again.

My self-imposed deadline to finish polishing Dakotashi and get it out there is the end of September. My drop-dead deadline is to do that by the beginning of NaNoWriMo 2017.

Terminology

In my brainstorming, what little I did of it, before NaNo started, I didn’t quite figure out what I’m going to name everything. I ran out of steam. Could I have avoided interruptions to my first-day storm of words by thinking of most terms in advance? Yes, of course. But it’s hard to predict all the terms needed for a story ahead of time anyway. Will I keep everything I came up with in the middle of my creative outpouring? Probably not. I admit I would have preferred to know more ahead of time. But part of the fun of doing NaNo, are the discoveries made along the way. Even names and terms.

Interesting factoid. I wrote just over 3,300 words the first day of NaNo. While writing those new words I came up with twelve new terms for special things in the world I’m creating. Five terms I had prepared in advance.

Term I’m probably keeping: Gloss (term for magic)

Term I’m probably not keeping: Gloss gun

Clearly, gloss is an actual word. I like repurposing and redefining words to my own ends. This happens all the time with slang. “Cool,” for example. I’m using the term aura for what it generally means in a fantasy setting, but I wanted to avoid another historically used word  aether,  because I usually only see it in steampunk settings, which this story definitely is not.

I’m making these decisions as quickly as I can on the fly. While, I would have liked to had more figured out ahead of time, naming things is part of the fun. I’m looking forward to seeing what I come up with tomorrow.

(Now, if only naming characters worked as well.)

I have words!

​It’s November 1, which means NaNoWriMo has started. I’m less prepared than ever and will be pantsing more than I am comfortable with, but I got started at lunch and words happened. 

It’s always exciting to start a new story, but please wish me luck because I have a feeling this year I might need it. 

Behind Schedule

I am way behind in my NaNo prep for this year, although I’m making some progress. The world-building, especially the magic, is starting to click. But I only know bits and pieces about my characters and what they want. I know even less about the plot, even though the whole concept is nominally based on the TV show Nikita. I say nominally, because while the idea started with Nikita, because of differences in the world, except some really basic tropes (like a super-secret semi-government assassin/spy organization), there are significant divergences.

I may start with the least amount of planning I’ve ever done, which is worrisome, because I am not a pantser. I need to know where I am going. But I’m going to do it anyway and hopefully this won’t be the first year I haven’t gotten to 50k!

I don’t have a real title yet or names for things like the country/city where it takes place, the secret Division-like organization, or my main characters. However, I am calling the project Cybermagic, for now,

Wish me luck!

NaNoWriMo Mid-point update

I admit that this year has been more of a struggle for me. I will presume this has to do with writing the 2nd half of a novel instead of starting at the beginning. NaNovices beware. Don’t do this until you have a better sense of your process and flow. This is why the good folks at NaNo HQ tell you not to.

With that said, I’m doing well, ahead of the pace for 50k, but far behind my blistering word count from last year. As of Saturday (the official midpoint I was at 29,609. At the end of today, I stand at 33,155. So which makes the entire Dakotashi 2 novel about 83k so far. I was hoping for 100k, but as I’m through the climax now, I doubt I will get that far. I did forget to write a scene–one of those things I thought of, but didn’t write down on an Scrivener index card and therefore skipped. Oops. So I still have the skipped scene (or two) and several wrap up scenes to write.

Then I’m going to try pantsing it for the rest of the month on a new project that I’m pretty excited about. But I still expect the pantsing experiment to be a spectacular failure as I seem to need to map of where I’m going in a novel in order to get there, but we shall see. I’m hoping that I’ve matured in my writing some since the last time I tried writing without a plan, but if I need to in order to keep going, I will allow myself some brainstorming and plotting.

I want to get to 50k no matter what.

Progress NaNoWriMo 2014

Participant-2014-Facebook-ProfileKeep updated with my progress on the 2nd half of  Dakotashi Book 2 during National Novel Writing Month. My NaNo username is dont_look_back, which is a reminder to turn my inner editor off during November.

Off to a good start!

The first day of National Novel Writing Month 2014 is just about over and I am off to a good start. With the kick-off party/write-in, where I ate too much, sat next to my writing bestie and kicked butt in a couple word wars, plus the words sprints I did later in the day, I got to 5,500 words.

If I keep up this pace, I will reach my goal of 50,000 on November 10!! hahahaha. That’s what the NaNo chart says when I entered my word count says anyway. The beginning of the month is usually easier for me, so we’ll see how it goes, but I know I can finish. I’m actually worried about whether I have enough scenes left in my book! Since I’m writing the 2nd half of my Dakotashi sequel (so many untitled books for me!), this could be problematic.

The “ticking clock” in this book is not subtle at all. When I started this morning Dakotashi had 4 days left to do what he needed to do. By the end of the day it was 3. Can three days use up 44,500 words? We shall see!