All posts by Gayle

Quick Take: Updraft

Updraft coverI am sorry it’s taken me so long to read this book, but it was worth the wait. The world building was intricate and obviously layered in with great care. At first, I felt like I was thrown in the deep end–as it is quite immersive–but I quickly started to tread water and found a world quite unlike any I’ve encountered in fantasy before, which made it refreshing. It was also an engaging read. The heroine was determined and easy to root for and her penchant for uncovering more and more secrets–and get into trouble because of it–kept up the tension. I was a little distracted by the character named Nat, only because one of the oldest characters I ever created is named Nat. So I kept wondering if the author was inspired by the same fictional Nat as me–the Nathaniel (Nat) from The Witch of Blackbird Pond, a book I absolutely adored when I was in 5th or 6th grade.

I’m looking forward to reading the other books set in the Bone Universe and whatever else Ms. Wilde writes in the future. She was kind enough to sign this copy (tbh, my copy has a different cover, but I like the one shown here better) for me at Balticon a while back and we actually have an acquaintance in common, so I’m definitely rooting for her success. I’m also excited because I think this might be a good comp for my WIP, but by the time I get it ready to go, Updraft might not be recently published enough.

Busting a Writing Blockage

So I’m lucky enough to have never experienced what most people think of as writer’s block. That iconic image of staring at a bright screen and literally having no idea what to write. That’s never happened to me. I have occasionally worried I might run out of ideas for stories, but inevitably something will strike me at the oddest time. I’ve had two ideas while listening to NPR so I give my local station a monthly donation because they are awesome!!!

I have gotten stuck before in a WIP (many times!), but I’ve never thought of it as writer’s block, per se because it isn’t that I don’t know what to write, I’m just having some sort of issue with my manuscript that I need to work through before I can continue. My subconscious knows there is a problem with the story.  And now after an epiphany about my current WIP in the wee hours last night, I’ve begun to think of what I typically experience as a writing blockage. The story is temporarily clogged, but with some prodding, the blockage will clear and the story will flow freely again.

Sometimes I don’t even realize I have a blockage until after I’ve figured it out. And then I’m like, oh I should have known there was something wrong with the story, since I’ve been so reluctant to work on it! Hopefully, others will be better at recognizing it than me because I have some ideas on how to be a plumber for your own story (am I taking this metaphor too far? I think I might be!).

This time I attributed my lack of eagerness for my WIP to still being burnt out from NaNoWriMo. I wrote 80k and there’s still so much story left! It was a little overwhelming. But I didn’t really worry about it because I’ve been busy with other writerly and productive things this month. So that’s my first suggestion: take a break. Do something else creative for awhile. Let your brain rest from one story to work on something else. Then, when you go back, you might see the problem more clearly. I realized that I was having my character do something because PLOT REASONS and not because she would actually do that thing. It made sense at the time when I was outlining, but when I was writing, it felt wrong. I pushed that thought away because NaNoWriMo, but my gut was correct. So I went ahead and revised the scene a little bit, toned it down some and now I’m much more comfortable with the direction.

If you don’t have time to take a break or don’t have another project to work on, try rereading what you’ve written. You may not want to start revising (you can if you want to), but think about the choices your characters make or the things happening to them, look for problems with the story that may be causing your blockage. Brainstorm some different choices for them. What would happen if they chose differently at a key point? Or maybe the problem is with what you’re going to write next. Brainstorm different ideas for where the story might go, maybe your brain is telling you you need to rethink the direction. Brainstorming is awesome because none of it is set in stone (and by stone I mean in-story words, which obviously aren’t set in stone, but may be hard to delete since you worked so hard on them). See where it takes you.

And finally, pick up a writing book. Something about plot and structure or character development or anything storytelling/craft related (I don’t think grammar books would have the same impact). Read a couple chapters and let your mind wander down whatever path it wants. Jot down notes. My brain is always sparking when reading books about writing, even if I’ve read the book before. And even if the book doesn’t relate to the issue you are having, you never know what connections your brain will make. Two of my favorites are Donald Maass and James Scott Bell, but there are so many writing books out there. You don’t even necessarily need to take any of their advice either, but if there are exercises, try them out. The main goal is to get your story flowing again.

Hopefully, I will remain blockage free moving forward and I hope you do too! But if the worst happens, maybe one of these ideas will help you out. Happy writing!

 

Quick Take: Black Panther

I’ve been looking forward to this movie and it didn’t disappoint. More than any Marvel movie, this one felt like a fantasy novel to me, with dynastic struggle, tribal factions and family secrets. And of course there was the struggle between protecting your own and reaching out to help others. The acting was great and I loved how they connected everything to character development. Loved it.

Bullet Journal: Work & Personal Combination

As I said in my first bullet journal article, I needed to figure out how to combine my work and personal items together so I could keep my number of journals to two. I don’t want anything but writing and brainstorming in my writing journal. I couldn’t find a lot online about people who use their journals for both work and personal items. It seems people generally either have two separate journals, only use a journal for one or the other, or combine one with electronic help. I had three main spreads to figure out for this: future log, monthly log and my daily/weekly spreads. (I apologize for my photography and the shadows of my hand in them! But I don’t apologize for the utilitarian nature of my spreads. I don’t even use a ruler. There are tons of other places you can go to find pretty bullet journals.)

The easiest was the monthly log. A lot of people get very complicated with theirs, wanting to see a grid-like a calendar that hangs on a wall. I’ve used the more traditional, original monthly spread before and liked it, so I’m sticking with that. On the left-hand page, I run down the numbers of the days of the month, with the letter of the week next to it. Here I can transfer birthdays, events and appointments from my future log. On the right-hand page, I divide the page in half with a horizontal line halfway down the page. Since I have more “projects” at work than I do personally, I write down the projects for work in the top section and then anything I’m working on or need to note for personal things in the bottom half. If I start needing more room for work, I’ll consider only using the bottom third for personal items.

Next was my future log. This maps out the entire year. I had originally intended to just have an empty space for each month but decided to add a little grid calendar in each section for a visual representation of the month. One the future log I can put birthdays, planned time off, holidays, important meetings and events that I know about months in advance. Then when that month rolls around, I can transfer those to my monthly log. I wanted to have plenty of space, so I used two pages for six months, four pages total for the year. For this spread, I start with holidays and birthdays at the top, followed by personal items and put work-related meetings and items at the bottom and move up.future log

Finally, I needed to figure out my daily logs. One of the benefits of a bullet journal is its flexibility. A lot of the daily/weekly spreads I’ve seen online do a fixed spread for their dailies/weeklies. Some may have daily pages in addition where they can keep the flexibility. I didn’t want to give up my flexibility, but I also didn’t want to have two sets of pages. So I knew I needed to figure out a way to combine them somehow. I needed some kind of weekly calendar to put appointments later in the week where I could see them. Only a daily log wouldn’t work either.

I started by running a calendar for the week across the top of a two-page spread. Then having dailies below. In addition, I had a monthly habit tracker. While the weekly calendar was working fine, I didn’t like the habit tracker being so separate from what I was looking at every day. So I decided to try and fit in a weekly habit tracker instead. Below is what I have come up with. I think it’s working well, but I could always change it up again if I think of something else. The ability to change your mind is one of the major benefits of the bullet journal!

The calendar goes down the left of the left-hand page, with the habit tracker next to it. Drawing the boxes for that is a little tedious, but I feel like I need something to guide me. A blank square is too blank. I have room in the first box for a short inspirational quote. On the right page, I start my dailies. I used a little flag for the day of the week and the date. I put a little cloud and a short description of the weather and beneath a positive statement for the day. Invetiably, my note for Friday is, “It’s Friday!” On the right, you can see the beginnings of the box for my food log. I’m not currently counting calories or anything. I just write down what I eat during the day. This way the dailies can be as short or long as I need them.

A note about my dailies. I log all my items together whether personal or work-related. There’s no way to tell how much room I might need for either type, so I don’t have a designated space. For work items, I used the standard bullet. For all appointments/events, I use the original open circle bullet. For personal items, instead of doing some other shape I use a bullet with an open circled around it. So it looks more like a target. This way I can still use the > to reschedule and X them out when complete, but there is enough difference for me to tell the difference between them at a glance. And I still use a hash for notes when needed. I keep a running collection of meeting notes though, so I don’t have a ton of notes showing up in my daily logs.

So those are my main bullet journal spreads in detail and how I combine my work and personal items together. I have two more articles planned, one on my meal planning spreads and the other on my goal planning for the year.

Quick Take: Star Trek: Discovery

I admit I have a spotty history with watching Star Trek. I’ve only seen a few episodes of the original series. I never watched any of Enterprise. I watched some (maybe a lot?) of Voyager and Deep Space Nine. I did watch a lot of Next Generation and I remember looking forward to it each week. However, none of those experiences (if I remember correctly) came as close to how I felt watching Star Trek Discovery this season. It truly became one of the shows I most looked forward to every week and made sure I watched as soon as possible. I could go into a lot of detail about what I like about it, but this is supposed to be a Quick Take so I won’t. But I will say that the characters are awesome and I was surprised by a lot of the twists and turns of the season. I also watched After Trek right afterwards. The actors and people involved in the show are delightful and it really added to my experience. And since it wasn’t just fans talking to fans and speculating, but actual conversations with actors, writers, directors and producers, I really felt like I received real insight into the show. In conclusion, I loved this show and can’t wait for next season.

New Discoveries about Maya Civilization: Perfect timing for my next editing project

Way back in 2013 I managed to write an entire 1st draft during NaNoWriMo. I call it The Vern after an important religious figure in the book. The setting is inspired by the Maya, but I made up all the religious ceremonies etc based on another idea I had even longer ago. Anyway, the setting, temples, food, clothing, and architecture is all Maya-inspired.

I’ve recently decided this will be the next project I focus on after I finish writing Skyfall because the first draft is complete. The book I started writing during NaNo 2016 isn’t finished yet, so I decided to hold off on that one. My goal–and a steep one–will be to revise it by the end of the year. This is probably overly ambitious, but I can try.

So, when I heard on the radio that archeologists have discovered that the Maya civilization is much more extensive in area and dense in population than previously thought, I figured it was a sign I’d chosen the correct project to work on next. This is so exciting for me because what I’ve imagined for my book is actually closer to reality than I expected. I had to fudge some stuff (it’s fantasy, remember) to create the feeling I wanted for the setting, but now I’ll be closer to the truth which is always nice. The big discoveries I’m most interested in are:

  • denser population (3-4x what they thought), possibly 10 million people
  • cities connected by raised causeways! for trade and travel
  • massive farming and irrigation operations
  •  more interconnected fortifications and other evidence of war than they thought and from before they thought

All of this will help define the world of The Vern when I go back and start revising. I’m really hoping to focus on my setting this next draft and all this will help. I’m pretty good at societal structures and history in my world-building, but the actual physical details are more difficult for me.

 

Bullet Journal: Backstory

So I started a bullet journal awhile ago but didn’t really keep up with it. The problem was I loved some of it (the indexing and threading possibilities) for my writing journals but didn’t want to “clutter” up whatever notebook I use for writing with things like to-do lists and meal planning. Second, I was hesitant to mesh personal and work-related items together.

I did pretty good with a work bullet journal when I started my new job in January, but tapered off over the summer. Also, I was realizing a need for one in my non-work life. So for this January I decided to try again and I would figure out a way to include work and personal together, otherwise I’d need to carry around three notebooks! Two is plenty, thank you very much! But more on that in a future post.

So what is a bullet journal? Well, it’s a completely analog and flexible task and planning management system. There are many sites who do a great job of explaining so I’m not going to repeat their work. I should also say that if you look online for bullet journal ideas, you will see some amazing and artistic users out there. Don’t be intimidated. A bullet journal doesn’t need to be a work of art to work. That’s not the point. If you are someone who likes to doodle or can do calligraphy, go for it. If not, no worries. Mine are simple and utilitarian and that works too.

A little history.  I’ve always loved planners. I’m generally not a type A personality, but something about those school planners always gave me joy. But once out in the real world, they didn’t seem to cut it. I’d have tons of notepads with different to-do and meeting notes, without a way to organize or find important information again. And while the built-in daily and weekly sections of pre-printed planners were ok, their built-in year and monthly pages left something to be desired.

So how does the bullet journal answer those needs? It is the indexing and the monthly and future logs that makes this system revolutionary to me.

Indexing: it is exactly what it sounds like. You number all your pages and enter in an index the subject of each page so you can find it again. This is so useful I’ve kept this habit for my writing journals, even though I don’t use any other bullet journal features in them. I also moved it to the back of my notebooks like a real index, instead of at the beginning like most people do (and I do for my non-writing bujo). For writing, it’s harder to lump entries together. Every scene and brainstorming subject needs its own entry in order to be able to reference them, so I can’t tell how many pages I’ll need for the index. I just start with the last page and when that page is full, move backward through the notebook. When the contents meets the index, my notebook is full!

Monthly and Future logs: like I said most planners have these, but they are not flexible. With a bujo, you can make your squares of your yearly as big and take up as many pages as you want, but still be able to view the year pretty much at a glance. For my monthly, I generally keep the original spread, which is two pages, with the days numbered down the far left, where you can enter important events, appointments or deadlines and on the right page I list important projects and to-do items for the month. I refer back when I make my daily/weekly spreads.

So, there you have it. A little about why I use the bullet journal system and what about it was so revolutionary to me. I’ll post more later on my specific journal and my goal planning. It may be one post or two.

 

Reading Goal

One of the major pieces of advice for new and aspiring writers is to read. Not only for inspiration and to soak up different writing styles, but to understand what is out there in the market. I used to be really well read in my genre. I used to read voraciously, but at some point the extent of my reading dropped off the face of a cliff. I think a number a factors were involved, including starting to read too many books that ended up being disappointing, in general not being able to become absorbed because my writer brain won’t turn off, and if I do become absorbed, the inability to stop reading. I know, contradictory, right? But I’m really too old to stay up all night and still go to work the next day. Also, there has been an element of wanting to avoid stories that will wreck me. So over the past few years I’ve stuck mainly to books by authors I know.

THIS IS A PROBLEM! See post about trouble finding comp titles. Ugh.

So while I don’t normally do resolutions (for reasons), this year I did do some goal planning. (Post to come.) And one of those goals was to read at least one book/month this year. Talk about a low bar, I know. But baby steps. Really, I just want to rediscover my love of reading. I’ve missed it.

To narrow down my massive amount of choices, I started thinking about some guidelines to my choices. Such as:

  1. At least six authors I haven’t read before.
  2. Four possible comp titles (all published within last 3 years)
  3. Three YA.
  4. At least three genres other than fantasy (historical, romance, science fiction etc)
  5. Three historical/alternate fantasy.
  6. Three by diverse authors.
  7. At least six adult fantasy of any kind.
  8. At least four from books I already own.
  9. Two in which world is inspired by non-western cultural or historical themes.
  10. No two books by same author.

Well, mainly because of having to choose four from books I already own, fitting all this criteria into twelve books is basically impossible. And there were so many books I was finding that I would love to read, especially ones being published later this year. So I’ve decided to expand my goal to EIGHTEEN books!! And hopefully, I’ll read even MORE than this, since if I start a series, I can’t count any sequels toward my eighteen. Also, it’s clear I can up my number in a couple of my criteria above. For example, more YA (6) and more diverse authors (6), non-western setting (4).

So far I’ve picked out 10 books (numbers in parentheses are the criteria they fulfill):

  1. Oathbringer by Brandon Sanderson; January book, completed! (7,8)
  2. Updraft by Fran Wilde; February book, started & loving it so far! (1, 7, 8)
  3. The Lions of Al-Rassan by Guy Gavriel Kay (5, 7, 8)
  4. The Lady’s Guide to Petticoats and Pirates by Mackenzie Lee (3, 4) out Oct 2
  5. The Poppy War by R.F. Kuang (1, 5, 6, 7) out May 1
  6. Children of Blood and Bone by Tomi Adeyemi (1, 3, 6, 9) out March 6
  7. Witchmark by C.L. Polk (1, 2, 5, 7) out June 19
  8. Flame in the Mist by Renée Aheidh (1, 3, 5, 6, 9)
  9. House of Shattered Wings by Ailette de Bodard (1, 2, 5, 6, 7)
  10. Watchmaker of Filigree Street by Natasha Pulley (1, 2, 5, 6, 7)

Since the priority is my genre alternate/historical fantasy and finding comp titles, that is mostly what I focused on above. So I’ll have room to explore other genres and sub-genres and read sequels to series I’ve already started reading. The next Nora Roberts Romantic suspense, Kevin Hearne’s last Iron Druid book, the next Honor Harrington (main series), new books by Ally Carter and Mary Robinette Kowal have a very good chance to making my list and authors I haven’t read who weren’t quite close enough to my work to make the first cut (Priest of Bones by Peter McLean, City of Lies by Sam Hawke, An Alchemy of Masks & Mirros by Curtis Craddock). I also want to check out at least one of the mega best selling YA series by Leigh Bardugo, Sarah J. Maass or Victoria Aveyard (I’m sure there are others too). Hmmm. I might need to raise the bar again!

Any suggestions? Am I forgetting some criteria I should be considering? Wish me luck!

Quick Take: Mindhunter, Manhunt: The Unabomber, La Mante

 

 

 

I’m pairing these three programs together because they are all similarly about serial killers, they are all multiple episode tv shows, and are all available on Netflix.

Mindhunter goes back to the beginning of profiling of serial killers and focuses more on the task of developing a system for that rather than any one case, although there is one that is teased throughout. It started off a little slower, but then races forward as the main character, brilliantly played by Jonathan Groff (yes, King George III from Hamilton!), deteriorates. I found the show mesmerizing.

Manhunt: The Unabomber also focuses on one profiler, this time excellently played by Sam Worthington. He also deteriorates over the course of the series. And while this one takes place in the 1990s, and profiling has been around for awhile, he does help develop a new technique. It was a very intriguing story, especially since it was happening when I felt like I should remember stuff about it, but I really don’t.

Finally, La Mante, which is a French production with subtitles. It takes place today and follows a police detective who is convinced to work with his convicted serial-killer mother on copycat case of her crimes. It’s great. Lots of twists and turns. The woman who plays the mother is just amazing. I was really sucked in. If you haven’t you should give some of the subtitled shows on Netflix a try anyway, there are a lot of great options.

Quick Take: Oathbringer

The latest installment in Brandon Anderson’s epic Stomlight Archives, Oathbringer reliability moves the story forward. I didn’t feel like it was stalling much. The action led up to a great climax, we learned tidbits more of the greater conflict coming, and the characters interact and start to come into their own. All around great read, if long like most fantasy epics.